Late night out in Melbourne

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Late night out in Melbourne

Postby bigsarg7 on Sun Jun 12, 2016 12:59 am

Well, sadly I watched my team get flogged by the Hawks last night, wasn't unexpected but it was worse than I had thought. Following the footy we headed to crown for dinner then walked back to fed square, glad I had my camera. I haven't taken many photos around melbourne especially at night, but I gave it a go at around 1 am this morning. Heres one of my favourites from the late night walk, in colour and B & W. Hope you like it as much as I do. Not my usual photography style but always good to shoot something different once in a while.

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Re: Late night out in Melbourne

Postby zafra52 on Sun Jun 12, 2016 8:31 pm

Both are great pictures, but I prefer the colour one.
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Re: Late night out in Melbourne

Postby Matt. K on Mon Jun 13, 2016 5:24 pm

I like both. Bet they look brilliant on a large monitor.
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Re: Late night out in Melbourne

Postby !~DeViNe~DaRkNeSs~! on Mon Jun 13, 2016 8:30 pm

looks beaut in BW..
I just have a feel a slightly tighter left crop might help, i dunno I always get carried away cropping
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Re: Late night out in Melbourne

Postby bigsarg7 on Tue Jun 14, 2016 12:28 am

Thanks guys, Matt it does look great on my 27" monitor, made a great screen saver for now too! I'm having trouble choosing whether to get the coloured or the black and white image printed. I like them both but lean more towards the black and white more. I had tried a crop on the left but I felt it was unbalanced, and as it is the river in my opinion (doesn't hold all that much value) draws my eyes further into the image, but when it was cropped I didn't feel it did it quite as much. I too find cropping images something difficult at times.


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Re: Late night out in Melbourne

Postby ozimax on Wed Jun 15, 2016 7:46 am

Great shots Kristen.

You're think your team is doing badly? Try following the Pies... :biglaugh:
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Re: Late night out in Melbourne

Postby gstark on Wed Jun 15, 2016 8:01 am

I'd like just a nudge more contrast in the mono treatment. Making the blacks blackerer.

ozimax wrote:You're think your team is doing badly? Try following the Pies... :biglaugh:


Try following the Roosters ... :(
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Re: Late night out in Melbourne

Postby ozimax on Wed Jun 15, 2016 11:54 am

gstark wrote:I'd like just a nudge more contrast in the mono treatment. Making the blacks blackerer.

ozimax wrote:You're think your team is doing badly? Try following the Pies... :biglaugh:


Try following the Roosters ... :(


There's only one consolation in following a truly dreadful Rabbitoh's side. They're still ahead of the Roosters... :biglaugh: :biglaugh:
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Re: Late night out in Melbourne

Postby ozimax on Wed Jun 15, 2016 11:55 am

gstark wrote:I'd like just a nudge more contrast in the mono treatment. Making the blacks blackerer.


Letz lern gooder english... :biglaugh: :biglaugh:
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Re: Late night out in Melbourne

Postby gstark on Thu Jun 16, 2016 8:23 am

ozimax wrote:
gstark wrote:I'd like just a nudge more contrast in the mono treatment. Making the blacks blackerer.

ozimax wrote:You're think your team is doing badly? Try following the Pies... :biglaugh:


Try following the Roosters ... :(


There's only one consolation in following a truly dreadful Rabbitoh's side. They're still ahead of the Roosters... :biglaugh: :biglaugh:


What's the difference between a square, and the Newcastle Knights?

A square has four points. :rotfl2: :rotfl2:
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