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Postby wendellt on Wed Sep 07, 2005 11:39 am

The 2nd and third one have that innocent sweet look about them
I am a fan of quarter view facial shos

the others are much more bold and daring

Next time if you want the to look at you just wave at them, and go 'Yu hoo gorgeous'

I would just try to seek out better lighting like 11 o'clock lighting always exentuates features and be more conscious of depth of field and ways to flush the background and give more emphasis on the model
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Postby psionic on Wed Sep 07, 2005 12:47 pm

I think picture 2 is the best. Its captured the moment and has that little something that the others didn't have. The Quarter view facial shot just sets it off. Picture 3 is somewhat similar but has a different mood, more laughable perhaps ?

Most of all in both 2 & 3 the model appears to be having fun and enjoying the experience. I didn't see that from the other girl, she seems restrained or unhappy for some reason.

Pics 4 & 5 are interesting, the camera angle is a bit off but that is understandable under the situation you have described. A smile from the girl on the right would have helped.

Pictue 6 is also nice... :wink: enough said

It certainly would have been an interesting night and a valuable experience. Congrats on some nice pictures and thanks for sharing !!!

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Postby avkomp on Wed Sep 07, 2005 12:53 pm

number 2 is the winner here.
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Postby robw25 on Wed Sep 07, 2005 1:27 pm

you lucky bastard ! well done i like # 2 also ... she looks nice and happy

cheers rob
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