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Postby Geoff on Mon Sep 19, 2005 10:08 am

Well challenege 6 for me was a bit of a last minute (well nearly) rush, and there were a few that I had to choose from in the end. This is one I didn't submit. Critique as always welcome.

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Postby Manta on Mon Sep 19, 2005 10:10 am

WOW. :shock:

I'm pleased you didn't put it in Geoff - would have made it all the more harder for the rest of us to get a look in.

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Postby Oneputt on Mon Sep 19, 2005 10:13 am

That is a very interesting image which I like. :D Is there any chance that you could bring out a little bit more cloud detail?
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Postby stubbsy on Mon Sep 19, 2005 10:34 am

Geoff

This is a great shot, but I'd remove a little of the orange colour cast and add some blue. This would in turn (most likely) bring up the clouds.
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Postby Geoff on Mon Sep 19, 2005 10:38 am

stubbsy wrote:Geoff

This is a great shot, but I'd remove a little of the orange colour cast and add some blue. This would in turn (most likely) bring up the clouds.


Thanx Peter and everyone. I will try now to reduce the colour cast, and add the blue as suggested. It was a bit difficult cos the pool was lit with two huge flood lights!

Decreased Temperature. Increased exposure and added some more blue.

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Postby Killakoala on Mon Sep 19, 2005 10:43 am

Pe-white balance probably would have looked more natural, but i quite like the orange colour caste on this image anyway. I think it looks great.

If this is the quality of image you didn't submit, i can't wait to see the one you did. :)
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Postby Glen on Mon Sep 19, 2005 10:50 am

Geoff, I also cant imagine what you did submit
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Postby ozczecho on Mon Sep 19, 2005 10:59 am

hmmm...I'd like to know what you did submit...this is excellent. I like the orange effect more then the "natural" look.
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Postby Geoff on Mon Sep 19, 2005 11:07 am

ozczecho wrote:hmmm...I'd like to know what you did submit...this is excellent. I like the orange effect more then the "natural" look.


Ok...now i'm starting to doubt my entry :?
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Postby kipper on Mon Sep 19, 2005 11:18 am

I really like the repost as the pool has that lovely blue-green tint to it. The cloud area could do with a bit of noise reduction though.
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Postby sirhc55 on Mon Sep 19, 2005 11:21 am

I prefer the original as is - the repost has just toooooo much noise :D
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Postby kipper on Mon Sep 19, 2005 11:40 am

Yep, it's unfortunate and is probably where an inverse grad ND filter (filter upside down) would of come in hand. Just needed the clouds to be exposed more. Out of interest what time of day was it shot? Might pay to have another crack when the sun is just below the horizon.
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Postby stubbsy on Mon Sep 19, 2005 2:43 pm

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I prefer the rework, but it definitely needs some noise reduction as has already been said.
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Postby Jumbuck on Mon Sep 19, 2005 3:12 pm

The rework is my choice. Was it with the 17-55 lens?

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Postby Geoff on Mon Sep 19, 2005 3:27 pm

Jumbuck wrote:The rework is my choice. Was it with the 17-55 lens?

South Curlie pool . . . . . childhood memories.

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Well spotted Jumbuck - correct on both counts :)
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Postby mic on Mon Sep 19, 2005 3:35 pm

Original Geoff is just brilliant !

Well done, Mic. :wink:
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Postby embi on Mon Sep 19, 2005 3:38 pm

I guess its not hard to work out which one is your comp entry then....
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Postby Geoff on Mon Sep 19, 2005 3:51 pm

embi wrote:I guess its not hard to work out which one is your comp entry then....


It might not be as easy to guess as you would imagine :)
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Postby Alpha_7 on Mon Sep 19, 2005 3:58 pm

Geoff wrote:
embi wrote:I guess its not hard to work out which one is your comp entry then....


It might not be as easy to guess as you would imagine :)


Well looking forward to the big reveal, come saturday!
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